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		<title>Would You Pay To Read This Blog?</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 04 Apr 2011 20:00:45 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>tdhurst</dc:creator>
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		<category><![CDATA[kontrary.com]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[rebecca thorman]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[<p>The era of free is over. It was a good run and I hope everyone learned a ton, but the idea that information/entertainment is sustainable solely through advertising is dead. In most cases, that is, unless you have hundreds of thousands of readers, the page views most sites attract won&#8217;t produce the click throughs and ad rates necessary to sustain much of anything, let alone a professional staff and top-notch server space.</p>
<p><a href="http://kontrary.com/about/"><img src="http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/kontraryquicksand.png" alt="" width="270" height="60" class="aligncenter size-full wp-image-6787" /></a>While Len Gutman&#8217;s immense personal wealth (I&#8217;m guessing here) will likely be enough to keep Valley PR Blog free for as long as it&#8217;s around, that&#8217;s only because the contributors here signed on knowing they wouldn&#8217;t get paid. We don&#8217;t take days to research most stories, nor do readers expect it. </p>
<p>But there are plenty of topics that could use more attention than the mainstream media have been able to give them. From Jason Hope to other stories that we aren&#8217;t aware of yet, the time needed just isn&#8217;t available, but the demand surely is.</p>
<p>Rebecca Thorman of Kontrary.com in Washington, D.C. had a similar problem. Touting her website as &#8220;&#8230;Kontrary picks up where the rest of the web left off,&#8221; Rebecca charges $5/month for unlimited access on site or via RSS.</p>
<p>I was one of her first subscribers, more so because I was curious if the writing would be worth paying for rather than balking at $5/month. Here&#8217;s an excerpt from her latest, an article about the <a href="http://kontrary.com/2011/04/04/the-devolution-of-the-huffington-post-forbes-and-hopefully-not-the-new-york-times/">devolution of the Huffington Post</a>:</p>
<blockquote><p>Inspired by its decentralized technology, the open web was supposed to shift the power from the corporation to the people. Many imagined a sort of utopian society that relied on abundance instead of the current economy’s premise of scarcity. And the web did fulfill the promise of abundance in the form of Free, but utopia would have to wait.</p></blockquote>
<p>While this excerpt may not tell the whole story, the article goes on for 1400+ words, which as anyone who writes can tell you, isn&#8217;t something that can be produced in less than an hour unless you forsake staples like editing, research and grammar.</p>
<p>I do think people will pay for good content, but only if there&#8217;s no other way to get it. The good storytellers and writers will charge, the bad ones won&#8217;t. We&#8217;ll see who&#8217;s around next year.</p>
<p>The era of free is over. Get your credit cards ready.</p>
<img src="http://www.valleyprblog.com/?ak_action=api_record_view&id=6781&type=feed" alt="" /><div style="display:block"><small><em>posted in <a href="http://www.valleyprblog.com/category/writing/">Writing</a> by Tdhurst <a href="http://www.valleyprblog.com/writing/would-you-pay-to-read-this-blog/#comments">Leave A Comment</a><br />&copy;2012 <a href="http://www.valleyprblog.com">Valley PR Blog</a>. All Rights Reserved.</em></small></div>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The era of free is over. It was a good run and I hope everyone learned a ton, but the idea that information/entertainment is sustainable solely through advertising is dead. In most cases, that is, unless you have hundreds of thousands of readers, the page views most sites attract won&#8217;t produce the click throughs and ad rates necessary to sustain much of anything, let alone a professional staff and top-notch server space.</p>
<p><a href="http://kontrary.com/about/"><img src="http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/kontraryquicksand.png" alt="" width="270" height="60" class="aligncenter size-full wp-image-6787" /></a>While Len Gutman&#8217;s immense personal wealth (I&#8217;m guessing here) will likely be enough to keep Valley PR Blog free for as long as it&#8217;s around, that&#8217;s only because the contributors here signed on knowing they wouldn&#8217;t get paid. We don&#8217;t take days to research most stories, nor do readers expect it. </p>
<p>But there are plenty of topics that could use more attention than the mainstream media have been able to give them. From Jason Hope to other stories that we aren&#8217;t aware of yet, the time needed just isn&#8217;t available, but the demand surely is.</p>
<p>Rebecca Thorman of Kontrary.com in Washington, D.C. had a similar problem. Touting her website as &#8220;&#8230;Kontrary picks up where the rest of the web left off,&#8221; Rebecca charges $5/month for unlimited access on site or via RSS.</p>
<p>I was one of her first subscribers, more so because I was curious if the writing would be worth paying for rather than balking at $5/month. Here&#8217;s an excerpt from her latest, an article about the <a href="http://kontrary.com/2011/04/04/the-devolution-of-the-huffington-post-forbes-and-hopefully-not-the-new-york-times/">devolution of the Huffington Post</a>:</p>
<blockquote><p>Inspired by its decentralized technology, the open web was supposed to shift the power from the corporation to the people. Many imagined a sort of utopian society that relied on abundance instead of the current economy’s premise of scarcity. And the web did fulfill the promise of abundance in the form of Free, but utopia would have to wait.</p></blockquote>
<p>While this excerpt may not tell the whole story, the article goes on for 1400+ words, which as anyone who writes can tell you, isn&#8217;t something that can be produced in less than an hour unless you forsake staples like editing, research and grammar.</p>
<p>I do think people will pay for good content, but only if there&#8217;s no other way to get it. The good storytellers and writers will charge, the bad ones won&#8217;t. We&#8217;ll see who&#8217;s around next year.</p>
<p>The era of free is over. Get your credit cards ready.</p>
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		<title>Weird PR writing rituals</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Aug 2010 20:02:28 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Linda VandeVrede</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Writing]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[home office]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[myragan.com]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[pr]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[public relations]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-5054" title="IMG00280 writing rituals 8-10" src="http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/IMG00280-writing-rituals-8-101-300x225.jpg" alt="IMG00280 writing rituals 8-10" width="300" height="225" />I thought I had strange rituals I went through when I sit down to write, but I guess it&#8217;s not so unusual.   A post earlier this year started a whole string of <a href="http://www.myragan.com/_forum/index.php?cat=331&amp;sub=1363&amp;threadnumber=546285&amp;page=2#22 ">comments</a> on <a href="http://www.myragan.com">www.myragan.com</a>.   At least I write with my shoes on. </p>
<p>Here are my professional office (as in you&#8217;re employed at someone else&#8217;s headquarters) and home office rituals &#8211; makes me look kind of normal, doesn&#8217;t it?</p>
<p><strong>Professional office</strong> &#8212; cup of coffee and a donut every morning to respond to e-mails. Wrote most of my documents in the afternoon, when I was less likely to be interrupted.</p>
<p><strong>Home office</strong> &#8212; if I have something really critical to write, I drive to the local AJ&#8217;s mid-day and get a cup of coffee or iced tea, depending on the season, and a pistachio or cinnamon muffin.   Something about the 2-mile roundtrip gives me a mental break, and I come back knowing I have a treat to consume while I plunge the depths of my brain for creative and technical ideas.</p>
<p>I never write barefoot, and usually have to write standing up at my computer, as I am now, wearing a headset. I can write in comfortable clothes or suits, and never have to wear a cowboy hat, like one of the folks who commented at <a href="http://www.myragan.com">www.myragan.com</a>.   Music is OK sometimes, but not always.</p>
<img src="http://www.valleyprblog.com/?ak_action=api_record_view&id=5051&type=feed" alt="" /><div style="display:block"><small><em>posted in <a href="http://www.valleyprblog.com/category/writing/">Writing</a> by Linda VandeVrede <a href="http://www.valleyprblog.com/writing/weird-pr-writing-rituals/#comments">Leave A Comment</a><br />&copy;2012 <a href="http://www.valleyprblog.com">Valley PR Blog</a>. All Rights Reserved.</em></small></div>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-5054" title="IMG00280 writing rituals 8-10" src="http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/IMG00280-writing-rituals-8-101-300x225.jpg" alt="IMG00280 writing rituals 8-10" width="300" height="225" />I thought I had strange rituals I went through when I sit down to write, but I guess it&#8217;s not so unusual.   A post earlier this year started a whole string of <a href="http://www.myragan.com/_forum/index.php?cat=331&amp;sub=1363&amp;threadnumber=546285&amp;page=2#22 ">comments</a> on <a href="http://www.myragan.com">www.myragan.com</a>.   At least I write with my shoes on. </p>
<p>Here are my professional office (as in you&#8217;re employed at someone else&#8217;s headquarters) and home office rituals &#8211; makes me look kind of normal, doesn&#8217;t it?</p>
<p><strong>Professional office</strong> &#8212; cup of coffee and a donut every morning to respond to e-mails. Wrote most of my documents in the afternoon, when I was less likely to be interrupted.</p>
<p><strong>Home office</strong> &#8212; if I have something really critical to write, I drive to the local AJ&#8217;s mid-day and get a cup of coffee or iced tea, depending on the season, and a pistachio or cinnamon muffin.   Something about the 2-mile roundtrip gives me a mental break, and I come back knowing I have a treat to consume while I plunge the depths of my brain for creative and technical ideas.</p>
<p>I never write barefoot, and usually have to write standing up at my computer, as I am now, wearing a headset. I can write in comfortable clothes or suits, and never have to wear a cowboy hat, like one of the folks who commented at <a href="http://www.myragan.com">www.myragan.com</a>.   Music is OK sometimes, but not always.</p>
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		<title>Are you published yet?</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 28 May 2010 16:00:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Linda VandeVrede</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[People]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Writing]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Ann Videan]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Arizona Book Publishing Association]]></category>
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		<category><![CDATA[Brian Solis]]></category>
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<div class="wp-caption alignleft" style="width: 159px"><img src="http://johnrobertmarlow.com/lonelykeyboard/g_book--self-publishing-manual.jpg" alt="Dan Poynters manual is a best-selling guide on self-publishing" width="149" height="223" /><p class="wp-caption-text">Dan Poynter&#39;s manual is a best-selling guide on self-publishing</p></div>
<p>PR Consultant <a href=" www.briansolis.com">Brian Solis </a>blogged last month that <strong>&#8220;businesses</strong> <strong>must become media</strong> <strong>in order to earn greater relevance and ultimately thought leadership within their respective markets.&#8221;</strong>  I would argue that individuals, particularly PR professionals, should also consider becoming their own media publishing center.<strong>  (</strong>Here is his full <a href="http://www.briansolis.com/2010/04/the-future-of-marketing-starts-with-publishing-part-1/">post</a> on the topic).</div>
<p>As a public relations professional, getting published adds credibility to your business and expertise.   If you&#8217;ve always wanted to write a book, why wait any longer?   So few hurdles remain now.  </p>
<p>Local public relations experts are already on their way &#8211; here are their insights.</p>
<p><strong>Jason Baer  <a href="http://www.convinceandconvert.com">www.convinceandconvert.com</a></strong></p>
<p>&#8220;I am co-authoring a book with Amber Naslund about social media&#8217;s impact on internal organization structure. It&#8217;s about how social media turns your company Inside Out, and should be published in early 2011.  Talking about social media&#8217;s impact on the brand/customer relationship has been well chronicled. What hasn&#8217;t been discussed as much, however, is the equally important (and perhaps more so) change in internal communication and staffing that social media and real-time business necessitate. I&#8217;m able to stick to a schedule because having a co-author that you can&#8217;t let down helps a lot. To me, it&#8217;s a $25 business card. I&#8217;m looking to do a lot more speaking in the coming years, and the book boosts credibility with event planners and speakers bureaus. I&#8217;m sure that having an agent is important for first-time authors. But it definitely helps to have created a lot of content that publishers can examine. Sure, we wrote a solid book proposal, but the fact that Amber and myself have several hundred blog posts each makes it a lot easier for publishers to take a chance on us. (Wiley, in our case).&#8221;</p>
<p><strong>Ann Videan  <a href="http://www.videanunlimited.com">www.videanunlimited.com</a></strong></p>
<p>&#8220;I am putting the finishing touches on my novel, <em>Rhythms and Muse</em>, which juxtaposes award-winning vocalist Alexander Lauren&#8217;s 1970s high school experiences with her current day Hollywood lifestyle. She discovers her life&#8217;s purpose truly is to enhance the world through music.  I hope to self-publish this summer, once I obtain permissions and licensing contracts from the music publishers who own lyrics I mention throughout the book. I also need to make final edits, and duplicate a CD of five original songs complement in the story. The idea for the plot of this book came to me in 1987 based on a number of personal experiences. I didn&#8217;t have an ending till it showed up in a dream one night back in the mid-1990s. I expect to only write this one book in the women&#8217;s fiction genre, as what I truly want to write is young adult adventure/fantasy. To stick to a schedule, I found a critique partner who was also writing a novel. We meet twice a week over lunch or tea to discuss our books. I finished the last quarter of my novel quickly, once I decided to treat it like a client and set aside two hours every day just to write. After tinkering away at the story for decades, I was able to finish it up in about six months by creating a dedicated writing schedule. My story revolves around a 40-something woman who realizes all her dreams figuratively and literally. To gain visibility and credibility, I plan to sell my books at nationwide &#8220;Dream Realization&#8221; workshops. I&#8217;m hoping this new audience of dreammakers will not only purchase my novel, but also feed my marketing consulting work. These women&#8217;s workshops serve as an add-on to the business tribe and word-of-mouth marketing strategy sessions I currently facilitate for my clients. There is so much to know about the publishing industry, and it is changing so rapidly now with new technology, that I&#8217;d simply recommend hiring a publishing coach. By the time I came to this realization and called the publishing coach myself, I had already created a document that took me years of research to compile, including research online, library and bookstore visits, and interviews with writers, editors publishers and other book industry experts.&#8221;</p>
<p>_____________</p>
<p>Some resources to get you started &#8211; here are some books on publishing and self-publishing you might consider reading before you plunge ahead:</p>
<p><strong>Publishing Basics</strong> &#8211; by Robert Bowie Johnson</p>
<p><strong>The Economical Guide to Self-Publishing</strong> &#8211; by Linda F. Radke</p>
<p><strong>Self-Publishing Manual</strong> &#8211; by Dan Poynter</p>
<p><strong>Writing the Non-Fiction Book</strong> &#8211; by Eva Shaw</p>
<p><strong>1001 Ways to Market Your Books</strong> &#8211; by John Kremer</p>
<p>Also, check out the website <a href="http://www.booksjustbooks.com">www.booksjustbooks.com</a> for tips on obtaining an ISBN number, information on copyrights, finding printers, etc.  For local assistance on the book publishing process, join the <a href="http://www.azbookpub.com">Arizona Book Publishing Association</a>, which meets monthly and features different speakers on a wide range of topics in the book industry.  Their June 30th meeting will feature a roundtable format with experts available on writing &amp; editing, book design, and printing.</p>
<p>And once your book is finished, consider creating a <a href="http://www.lindavandevrede.com/video/the-latest-in-book-promotion-video-book-trailers-for-only-300/">book video trailer </a>to help promote it.</p>
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<div class="wp-caption alignleft" style="width: 159px"><img src="http://johnrobertmarlow.com/lonelykeyboard/g_book--self-publishing-manual.jpg" alt="Dan Poynters manual is a best-selling guide on self-publishing" width="149" height="223" /><p class="wp-caption-text">Dan Poynter&#39;s manual is a best-selling guide on self-publishing</p></div>
<p>PR Consultant <a href=" www.briansolis.com">Brian Solis </a>blogged last month that <strong>&#8220;businesses</strong> <strong>must become media</strong> <strong>in order to earn greater relevance and ultimately thought leadership within their respective markets.&#8221;</strong>  I would argue that individuals, particularly PR professionals, should also consider becoming their own media publishing center.<strong>  (</strong>Here is his full <a href="http://www.briansolis.com/2010/04/the-future-of-marketing-starts-with-publishing-part-1/">post</a> on the topic).</div>
<p>As a public relations professional, getting published adds credibility to your business and expertise.   If you&#8217;ve always wanted to write a book, why wait any longer?   So few hurdles remain now.  </p>
<p>Local public relations experts are already on their way &#8211; here are their insights.</p>
<p><strong>Jason Baer  <a href="http://www.convinceandconvert.com">www.convinceandconvert.com</a></strong></p>
<p>&#8220;I am co-authoring a book with Amber Naslund about social media&#8217;s impact on internal organization structure. It&#8217;s about how social media turns your company Inside Out, and should be published in early 2011.  Talking about social media&#8217;s impact on the brand/customer relationship has been well chronicled. What hasn&#8217;t been discussed as much, however, is the equally important (and perhaps more so) change in internal communication and staffing that social media and real-time business necessitate. I&#8217;m able to stick to a schedule because having a co-author that you can&#8217;t let down helps a lot. To me, it&#8217;s a $25 business card. I&#8217;m looking to do a lot more speaking in the coming years, and the book boosts credibility with event planners and speakers bureaus. I&#8217;m sure that having an agent is important for first-time authors. But it definitely helps to have created a lot of content that publishers can examine. Sure, we wrote a solid book proposal, but the fact that Amber and myself have several hundred blog posts each makes it a lot easier for publishers to take a chance on us. (Wiley, in our case).&#8221;</p>
<p><strong>Ann Videan  <a href="http://www.videanunlimited.com">www.videanunlimited.com</a></strong></p>
<p>&#8220;I am putting the finishing touches on my novel, <em>Rhythms and Muse</em>, which juxtaposes award-winning vocalist Alexander Lauren&#8217;s 1970s high school experiences with her current day Hollywood lifestyle. She discovers her life&#8217;s purpose truly is to enhance the world through music.  I hope to self-publish this summer, once I obtain permissions and licensing contracts from the music publishers who own lyrics I mention throughout the book. I also need to make final edits, and duplicate a CD of five original songs complement in the story. The idea for the plot of this book came to me in 1987 based on a number of personal experiences. I didn&#8217;t have an ending till it showed up in a dream one night back in the mid-1990s. I expect to only write this one book in the women&#8217;s fiction genre, as what I truly want to write is young adult adventure/fantasy. To stick to a schedule, I found a critique partner who was also writing a novel. We meet twice a week over lunch or tea to discuss our books. I finished the last quarter of my novel quickly, once I decided to treat it like a client and set aside two hours every day just to write. After tinkering away at the story for decades, I was able to finish it up in about six months by creating a dedicated writing schedule. My story revolves around a 40-something woman who realizes all her dreams figuratively and literally. To gain visibility and credibility, I plan to sell my books at nationwide &#8220;Dream Realization&#8221; workshops. I&#8217;m hoping this new audience of dreammakers will not only purchase my novel, but also feed my marketing consulting work. These women&#8217;s workshops serve as an add-on to the business tribe and word-of-mouth marketing strategy sessions I currently facilitate for my clients. There is so much to know about the publishing industry, and it is changing so rapidly now with new technology, that I&#8217;d simply recommend hiring a publishing coach. By the time I came to this realization and called the publishing coach myself, I had already created a document that took me years of research to compile, including research online, library and bookstore visits, and interviews with writers, editors publishers and other book industry experts.&#8221;</p>
<p>_____________</p>
<p>Some resources to get you started &#8211; here are some books on publishing and self-publishing you might consider reading before you plunge ahead:</p>
<p><strong>Publishing Basics</strong> &#8211; by Robert Bowie Johnson</p>
<p><strong>The Economical Guide to Self-Publishing</strong> &#8211; by Linda F. Radke</p>
<p><strong>Self-Publishing Manual</strong> &#8211; by Dan Poynter</p>
<p><strong>Writing the Non-Fiction Book</strong> &#8211; by Eva Shaw</p>
<p><strong>1001 Ways to Market Your Books</strong> &#8211; by John Kremer</p>
<p>Also, check out the website <a href="http://www.booksjustbooks.com">www.booksjustbooks.com</a> for tips on obtaining an ISBN number, information on copyrights, finding printers, etc.  For local assistance on the book publishing process, join the <a href="http://www.azbookpub.com">Arizona Book Publishing Association</a>, which meets monthly and features different speakers on a wide range of topics in the book industry.  Their June 30th meeting will feature a roundtable format with experts available on writing &amp; editing, book design, and printing.</p>
<p>And once your book is finished, consider creating a <a href="http://www.lindavandevrede.com/video/the-latest-in-book-promotion-video-book-trailers-for-only-300/">book video trailer </a>to help promote it.</p>
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		<title>Is anonymity one big excuse?</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Sep 2009 17:00:45 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Angelo Fernando</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>&#8216;UnclePat&#8217; got it right. He was responding to a question E.J. Montini  r<a href="http://www.azcentral.com/members/Blog/EJMontini/62904">aised in his blog recently</a>.</p>
<p><strong>Explain to me some of the reasons you believe that is is necessary for those who post responses to blogs or add their opinion to comment threads should to be anonymous. Or, rather, why you choose to do so, since it isn&#8217;t mandatory.</strong></p>
<p>Writing under the cover of the nom de plume, UnclePat commented that the main bad reason for someone to remain anonymous online was it gave the person the freedom to be a &#8216;mindless jerk.&#8217;</p>
<p>I can&#8217;t argue with that when I read some of the comments online at <a href="http://AZCentral.com">AZCentral.com</a></p>
<p>Except for the fact that there are some others who have no problem with calling out something or someone and putting their name to it. Just look at yesterday&#8217;s <em>Arizona Republic</em>, where Steve Kirk of Phoenix calls Rush Limbaugh a rude bore. Montini concludes in <a href="http://www.azcentral.com/members/Blog/EJMontini/63226">his column the same day</a> that fear is the main reason for this trend to hide behind fake names.</p>
<p>But there are other types of fear, and not just fear of wackos and lawsuits. I recently conducted <a href="http://hoipolloi.wordpress.com/2009/09/10/is-content-still-king-or-is-there-a-new-crown-prince/">a remote workshop for media professionals</a> in Sri Lanka, on  looking &#8216;beyond the blog&#8217; &#8211;at new modes of communications and interaction with audiences. There was a mixed group representing traditional and new media. Apparently some bloggers who wished to be not identified, were in the audience as well.</p>
<p>Toward the end of the session, one question came up that seemed more important than the rest. How to remain anonymous, and if it was a sensible thing. I wrestled with the question for several reasons. One was that we take our freedom of speech for granted, UnclePat&#8217;s point, notwithstanding. I know it&#8217;s different in countries where the government can beat you up or throw you into prison for random reasons. The other, of course, was credibility. I maintain that unless you have a compelling point of view or reason to stay behind the curtain, no one will take you seriously since the blogosphere is quite capable doing its own fact-checking. <a href="http://www.rathergate.com/?p=3394">Just ask Dan Rather</a>.</p>
<p>I am sure you face similar questions, especially related ones about whether you recommend moderating &#8211;and deleting&#8211; comments by blog readers who don&#8217;t validate who they are.</p>
<p>Digging deeper into this I noticed  <a href="http://advocacy.globalvoicesonline.org/projects/guide/">plenty of advice</a> on how to go about it, and many reasons why this is so . Take a look, and let me know your thoughts about this touchy topic.</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="http://www.eff.org/wp/blog-safely">How to blog safely</a> &#8212; Electronic Frontier Foundation</li>
<li><a href="http://blogs.mercurynews.com/kawakami/2009/05/21/warriors-pr-director-confirms-he-authored-anonymous-blog-comment/">PR Director found blogging anonymously</a></li>
<li>The <a href="http://www.blogherald.com/2006/01/09/anonymous-blog-posting-commenting-to-become-illegal-in-the-united-states-unless-you-have-only-nice-things-to-say-potentially-outlaws-comment-spam/">law against anonymous blogging</a> in the US</li>
<li><a href="http://www.rsf.org/Government-gets-blog-service.html">Yahoo and MSN sign deal with China</a> to prevent anonymous bloggers</li>
<li><a href="http://online.wsj.com/article/SB124287328648142113.html">Bloggers beware: what you write can get you sued</a></li>
</ul>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8216;UnclePat&#8217; got it right. He was responding to a question E.J. Montini  r<a href="http://www.azcentral.com/members/Blog/EJMontini/62904">aised in his blog recently</a>.</p>
<p><strong>Explain to me some of the reasons you believe that is is necessary for those who post responses to blogs or add their opinion to comment threads should to be anonymous. Or, rather, why you choose to do so, since it isn&#8217;t mandatory.</strong></p>
<p>Writing under the cover of the nom de plume, UnclePat commented that the main bad reason for someone to remain anonymous online was it gave the person the freedom to be a &#8216;mindless jerk.&#8217;</p>
<p>I can&#8217;t argue with that when I read some of the comments online at <a href="http://AZCentral.com">AZCentral.com</a></p>
<p>Except for the fact that there are some others who have no problem with calling out something or someone and putting their name to it. Just look at yesterday&#8217;s <em>Arizona Republic</em>, where Steve Kirk of Phoenix calls Rush Limbaugh a rude bore. Montini concludes in <a href="http://www.azcentral.com/members/Blog/EJMontini/63226">his column the same day</a> that fear is the main reason for this trend to hide behind fake names.</p>
<p>But there are other types of fear, and not just fear of wackos and lawsuits. I recently conducted <a href="http://hoipolloi.wordpress.com/2009/09/10/is-content-still-king-or-is-there-a-new-crown-prince/">a remote workshop for media professionals</a> in Sri Lanka, on  looking &#8216;beyond the blog&#8217; &#8211;at new modes of communications and interaction with audiences. There was a mixed group representing traditional and new media. Apparently some bloggers who wished to be not identified, were in the audience as well.</p>
<p>Toward the end of the session, one question came up that seemed more important than the rest. How to remain anonymous, and if it was a sensible thing. I wrestled with the question for several reasons. One was that we take our freedom of speech for granted, UnclePat&#8217;s point, notwithstanding. I know it&#8217;s different in countries where the government can beat you up or throw you into prison for random reasons. The other, of course, was credibility. I maintain that unless you have a compelling point of view or reason to stay behind the curtain, no one will take you seriously since the blogosphere is quite capable doing its own fact-checking. <a href="http://www.rathergate.com/?p=3394">Just ask Dan Rather</a>.</p>
<p>I am sure you face similar questions, especially related ones about whether you recommend moderating &#8211;and deleting&#8211; comments by blog readers who don&#8217;t validate who they are.</p>
<p>Digging deeper into this I noticed  <a href="http://advocacy.globalvoicesonline.org/projects/guide/">plenty of advice</a> on how to go about it, and many reasons why this is so . Take a look, and let me know your thoughts about this touchy topic.</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="http://www.eff.org/wp/blog-safely">How to blog safely</a> &#8212; Electronic Frontier Foundation</li>
<li><a href="http://blogs.mercurynews.com/kawakami/2009/05/21/warriors-pr-director-confirms-he-authored-anonymous-blog-comment/">PR Director found blogging anonymously</a></li>
<li>The <a href="http://www.blogherald.com/2006/01/09/anonymous-blog-posting-commenting-to-become-illegal-in-the-united-states-unless-you-have-only-nice-things-to-say-potentially-outlaws-comment-spam/">law against anonymous blogging</a> in the US</li>
<li><a href="http://www.rsf.org/Government-gets-blog-service.html">Yahoo and MSN sign deal with China</a> to prevent anonymous bloggers</li>
<li><a href="http://online.wsj.com/article/SB124287328648142113.html">Bloggers beware: what you write can get you sued</a></li>
</ul>
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		<title>Did Bobby Jindal need a speechwriter?</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 17:37:55 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Angelo Fernando</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright" style="10px;" src="http://images.huffingtonpost.com/gen/65523/thumbs/s-JINDAL-large.jpg" alt="" width="260" height="190" />I thought I was being a bit harsh when watching the Republican rebuttal the other day.  I thought his speech was a badly packaged naive response. My main point was (you could see the <a href="http://hoipolloi.wordpress.com/2009/02/25/bobby-jindals-not-ready-for-prime-time/">full post here</a>) from the basic: teleprompter training, to choice of anecdote, to simply weak speech.</p>
<p>I now see that <a href="http://twitter.com/davidglover/status/1247874157">others </a>have <a href="http://www.phillyburbs.com/news/news_details/article/62/2009/february/25/republicans-democrats-criticize-jindals-speech.html">thought</a> <a href="http://blogs.telegraph.co.uk/alex_spillius/blog/2009/02/25/bobby_jindal_bombs">he bombed</a>, too.</p>
<p>Let&#8217;s put politics aside and see what went wrong. I like to hear your thoughts. If you&#8217;re a speechwriter, I like to hear what were the weak areas that could have been rescured, and what should have been off limits.</p>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright" style="10px;" src="http://images.huffingtonpost.com/gen/65523/thumbs/s-JINDAL-large.jpg" alt="" width="260" height="190" />I thought I was being a bit harsh when watching the Republican rebuttal the other day.  I thought his speech was a badly packaged naive response. My main point was (you could see the <a href="http://hoipolloi.wordpress.com/2009/02/25/bobby-jindals-not-ready-for-prime-time/">full post here</a>) from the basic: teleprompter training, to choice of anecdote, to simply weak speech.</p>
<p>I now see that <a href="http://twitter.com/davidglover/status/1247874157">others </a>have <a href="http://www.phillyburbs.com/news/news_details/article/62/2009/february/25/republicans-democrats-criticize-jindals-speech.html">thought</a> <a href="http://blogs.telegraph.co.uk/alex_spillius/blog/2009/02/25/bobby_jindal_bombs">he bombed</a>, too.</p>
<p>Let&#8217;s put politics aside and see what went wrong. I like to hear your thoughts. If you&#8217;re a speechwriter, I like to hear what were the weak areas that could have been rescured, and what should have been off limits.</p>
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		<title>So much for being a &#8216;blogmonkey&#8217;</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Jan 2009 14:00:56 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Len Gutman</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignleft" style="float: left; margin: 10px;" src="http://www.lovesanimals.com/images/animals/monkey/funny_monkey.jpg" alt="monkey" width="248" height="180" />Lake Superior State University (that grand bastion of higher learning) has come out with its 34th annual &#8220;<a href="http://hosted.ap.org/dynamic/stories/B/BANNED_WORDS?SITE=IADES&amp;SECTION=HOME&amp;TEMPLATE=DEFAULT" target="_blank">List of Words to be Banished From the Queen&#8217;s English for Misuse, Over-use and General Uselessness</a>.&#8221; There are some funny ones that I too hope we never see again &#8212; most especially &#8220;first dude&#8221; as used to describe the potential of Todd Palin in the White House.</p>
<p>Fifteen terms were selected from reader submissions, like this one from Ed Hardiman of Bristow, Va.:</p>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;If I see one more corporation declare itself &#8216;green,&#8217; I&#8217;m going to start burning tires in my backyard.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p>Classic. I hope none of the 15 terms found their way into your press releases in 2008!</p>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignleft" style="float: left; margin: 10px;" src="http://www.lovesanimals.com/images/animals/monkey/funny_monkey.jpg" alt="monkey" width="248" height="180" />Lake Superior State University (that grand bastion of higher learning) has come out with its 34th annual &#8220;<a href="http://hosted.ap.org/dynamic/stories/B/BANNED_WORDS?SITE=IADES&amp;SECTION=HOME&amp;TEMPLATE=DEFAULT" target="_blank">List of Words to be Banished From the Queen&#8217;s English for Misuse, Over-use and General Uselessness</a>.&#8221; There are some funny ones that I too hope we never see again &#8212; most especially &#8220;first dude&#8221; as used to describe the potential of Todd Palin in the White House.</p>
<p>Fifteen terms were selected from reader submissions, like this one from Ed Hardiman of Bristow, Va.:</p>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;If I see one more corporation declare itself &#8216;green,&#8217; I&#8217;m going to start burning tires in my backyard.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p>Classic. I hope none of the 15 terms found their way into your press releases in 2008!</p>
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		<title>Waste Management Woman</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Jul 2008 04:17:35 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Charlotte Shaff</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>I was going through my <a href="http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=735050158" target="_blank">Facebook</a> friends and saw that a local writer, <a href="http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1121943981" target="_blank">Christia Gibbons</a> has a new <a href="http://www.wastemanagementwoman.blogspot.com/" target="_blank">blog</a>! </p>
<blockquote><p>I fear that while the Internet has opened up the world, the massive amount of unscrutinized information in poorly written form is dumbing us down. I&#8217;m a lifelong journalist from reporter to city editor, from freelancer to college instructor. I know the damage caused by inadequate communication.</p></blockquote>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I was going through my <a href="http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=735050158" target="_blank">Facebook</a> friends and saw that a local writer, <a href="http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1121943981" target="_blank">Christia Gibbons</a> has a new <a href="http://www.wastemanagementwoman.blogspot.com/" target="_blank">blog</a>! </p>
<blockquote><p>I fear that while the Internet has opened up the world, the massive amount of unscrutinized information in poorly written form is dumbing us down. I&#8217;m a lifelong journalist from reporter to city editor, from freelancer to college instructor. I know the damage caused by inadequate communication.</p></blockquote>
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		<title>To AP or not to AP</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Jul 2008 16:02:42 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Charlotte Shaff</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/07/2008_sm_apstylebook.gif"><img class="alignleft size-thumbnail wp-image-1247" src="http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/07/2008_sm_apstylebook.gif" alt="" width="100" height="129" /></a>When I started out in PR, I had no clue what <a href="http://www.apstylebook.com/" target="_blank">AP Style </a>was or meant. I went to school for Broadcasting and Cinematic Arts and the majority of my classes were in production, ad copywriting and critique at <strong>Central Michigan University</strong>. I never took a Journalism class because I was planning on being a TV Promotion Director someday. Not one time was AP Style brought up as I looked for jobs. My career stemmed from television promotion writing and producing, along with some work at an advertising agency working in promotion. For years, I wrote very short, to the point news topical teases and promotions. And when I started my biz, I&#8217;d write releases and pitch stories using the skills and knowlege from those experiences to get the attention of the media. My mission&#8230;what was teasable, beneficial to the audience and interesting.</p>
<p>AP Style never crossed my mind, nor did it really come up in conversations with others in the industry until about a year ago. I had worked on a client&#8217;s event with their national distributor&#8217;s PR person and she told me about an AP Style class she taught PR students. I was intrigued and then worried that maybe I was sending out releases that were making journalists cringe and laugh in horror.  Was it really a big deal to send out pitches or releases that weren&#8217;t written in AP Style?  </p>
<p>A few weeks ago at our <a href="http://www.phoenixprsa.org/mc/community/eventdetails.do?eventId=180963&amp;orgId=prsapc" target="_blank">PR Indies </a>lunch, we went around the table offering a tip to the others about working in PR. My ears perked up when one woman said we should not just write our releases AP Style, but also our pitches. When it came to my turn to give a tip, I said &#8220;Read the Valley PR Blog&#8221; and also said I was very interested in blogging about AP Style and had just earlier asked a few editors in town their thoughts on AP Style and they all had a general consensus that if the story is good, they don&#8217;t care if it came to them AP Style or not. This sparked some conversation around the table and that solidified my thoughts that this would be a great thing to blog about.</p>
<p>So, what do some local journalists have to say about AP Style and PR? Do they really care if we present them with an AP perfect pitch and release? Do we have a better chance of getting our information from a press release printed if its written in AP Style?  Well, I sent some survey questions to some local media and many of them were happy to offer their opinions.</p>
<p>Out of the twelve who responded, eight said they write AP Style. No one said they cared if a pitch was AP Style. Only one out of twelve said they cared if a release was written in AP Style. When I asked what they would do if they got a release that wasn&#8217;t written in AP Style, no one said they&#8217;d delete it or be upset about it, they just cared if it was a good story or not.</p>
<p>The main consensus from their comments was that it really boils down to giving them clear, full, to the point information. Most have to fact check and rewrite the story anyway, so as long as there are not glaring errors, missing information or typos, they will accept the story idea or release.</p>
<p>I think that the survey really boils down to this. You&#8217;ll get respect from providing the media what they need, and writing in AP Style is just icing on the cake. Should I brush up on my AP skills? Yes. But I think the main point of my job is to offer that reporter something that they will find of interest and relevance that is geared toward their audience.</p>
<p>For complete results and commentary, click <a href="http://www.surveymonkey.com/sr.aspx?sm=7iJdn_2bqoAIama2A2QYIHZSDm_2bLC0xrRE2jalbU5_2bCms_3d" target="_blank">here</a>.</p>
<p> </p>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/07/2008_sm_apstylebook.gif"><img class="alignleft size-thumbnail wp-image-1247" src="http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/07/2008_sm_apstylebook.gif" alt="" width="100" height="129" /></a>When I started out in PR, I had no clue what <a href="http://www.apstylebook.com/" target="_blank">AP Style </a>was or meant. I went to school for Broadcasting and Cinematic Arts and the majority of my classes were in production, ad copywriting and critique at <strong>Central Michigan University</strong>. I never took a Journalism class because I was planning on being a TV Promotion Director someday. Not one time was AP Style brought up as I looked for jobs. My career stemmed from television promotion writing and producing, along with some work at an advertising agency working in promotion. For years, I wrote very short, to the point news topical teases and promotions. And when I started my biz, I&#8217;d write releases and pitch stories using the skills and knowlege from those experiences to get the attention of the media. My mission&#8230;what was teasable, beneficial to the audience and interesting.</p>
<p>AP Style never crossed my mind, nor did it really come up in conversations with others in the industry until about a year ago. I had worked on a client&#8217;s event with their national distributor&#8217;s PR person and she told me about an AP Style class she taught PR students. I was intrigued and then worried that maybe I was sending out releases that were making journalists cringe and laugh in horror.  Was it really a big deal to send out pitches or releases that weren&#8217;t written in AP Style?  </p>
<p>A few weeks ago at our <a href="http://www.phoenixprsa.org/mc/community/eventdetails.do?eventId=180963&amp;orgId=prsapc" target="_blank">PR Indies </a>lunch, we went around the table offering a tip to the others about working in PR. My ears perked up when one woman said we should not just write our releases AP Style, but also our pitches. When it came to my turn to give a tip, I said &#8220;Read the Valley PR Blog&#8221; and also said I was very interested in blogging about AP Style and had just earlier asked a few editors in town their thoughts on AP Style and they all had a general consensus that if the story is good, they don&#8217;t care if it came to them AP Style or not. This sparked some conversation around the table and that solidified my thoughts that this would be a great thing to blog about.</p>
<p>So, what do some local journalists have to say about AP Style and PR? Do they really care if we present them with an AP perfect pitch and release? Do we have a better chance of getting our information from a press release printed if its written in AP Style?  Well, I sent some survey questions to some local media and many of them were happy to offer their opinions.</p>
<p>Out of the twelve who responded, eight said they write AP Style. No one said they cared if a pitch was AP Style. Only one out of twelve said they cared if a release was written in AP Style. When I asked what they would do if they got a release that wasn&#8217;t written in AP Style, no one said they&#8217;d delete it or be upset about it, they just cared if it was a good story or not.</p>
<p>The main consensus from their comments was that it really boils down to giving them clear, full, to the point information. Most have to fact check and rewrite the story anyway, so as long as there are not glaring errors, missing information or typos, they will accept the story idea or release.</p>
<p>I think that the survey really boils down to this. You&#8217;ll get respect from providing the media what they need, and writing in AP Style is just icing on the cake. Should I brush up on my AP skills? Yes. But I think the main point of my job is to offer that reporter something that they will find of interest and relevance that is geared toward their audience.</p>
<p>For complete results and commentary, click <a href="http://www.surveymonkey.com/sr.aspx?sm=7iJdn_2bqoAIama2A2QYIHZSDm_2bLC0xrRE2jalbU5_2bCms_3d" target="_blank">here</a>.</p>
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		<title>Women&#8217;s writing group looks for members</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Jul 2008 15:00:51 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Angelo Fernando</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>I spotted note tacked onto a message board at Starbucks in Tempe.</p>
<p>Melanie McCuin is planning to start a women&#8217;s writing group in Tempe. All genres are welcome. Email melanie.mccuin@gmail.com</p>
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<p>Melanie McCuin is planning to start a women&#8217;s writing group in Tempe. All genres are welcome. Email melanie.mccuin@gmail.com</p>
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		<title>CD Baby and the power of voice</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jun 2008 17:06:56 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Dan Wool</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/06/cdbaby.jpg'><img src="http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/06/cdbaby-300x200.jpg" alt="" title="cdbaby" width="300" height="200" class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-1151" /></a>When writing copy, who says you have to follow the rules? Sometimes you can create a brand personality all your own with strong writing and in the process, generate huge word-of-mouth.  </p>
<p>It all starts with nailing your brand&#8217;s voice. Below is an order confirmation from <a href="http://www.cdbaby.com">CD Baby</a>, an online independent music retailer. In a world where they compete with Apple/iTunes, Wal*Mart and Amazon &#8212; i.e. big box online retailers &#8212;  they are definitely at the far end of the &#8220;long tail.&#8221;</p>
<p>How do they stand out? They <em>know their audience</em> &#8212; thoughtful shoppers seeking out cool, new, independent music &#8212; and they delight them with a voice that&#8217;s not only fits the intellect but is delightfully unexpected.</p>
<p>&#8212;&#8211;Original Message&#8212;&#8211;<br />
From: CD Baby loves XXXX &lt;<a href="http://us.mc307.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=orders@cdbaby.com"><span id="lw_1214402470_1" class="yshortcuts">orders@cdbaby.com</span></a>&gt;<br />
To: <a href="http://us.mc307.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=alan4277@aol.com">emailaddress</a><br />
Sent: Tue, 17 Jun 2008 10:01:30 -0700 (PDT)<br />
Subject: XXXX &#8211; Your CD Baby Order!  (#4077506)</p>
<p>XXXX -</p>
<p>Thanks for your order with CD Baby!</p>
<p>#### ORDER # 40XXXX6 ######</p>
<p>WHERE YOU HEARD OF:<br />
band&#8217;s web site</p>
<p>Physical Items in this order:</p>
<p>=== Shipped Items ===<br />
** Shipped on 2008-06-17: **<br />
1 of XXXXXX: XXXXX ($9.99 each)<br />
***************</p>
<p>=========================</p>
<p>SHIPPING: $2.25<br />
GRAND TOTAL : $12.24 &#8211; US Dollars</p>
<p>SHIPPING ADDRESS:</p>
<p>XXXX<br />
XXXX<span id="lw_1214402470_2" class="yshortcuts" style="border-bottom: 1px dashed #0066cc; cursor: pointer;"><br />
Phoenix AZ 850XX<br />
UNITED STATES</span></p>
<p>BILLING ADDRESS:</p>
<p>XXXX<br />
<span id="lw_1214402470_3" class="yshortcuts" style="border-bottom: 1px dashed #0066cc; cursor: pointer;">XXXX<br />
Phoenix AZ 85020<br />
UNITED STATES</span></p>
<p>Your CD has been gently taken from our CD Baby shelves with sterilized<br />
contamination-free gloves and placed onto a satin pillow.</p>
<p>A team of 50 employees inspected your CD and polished it to make sure it<br />
was in the best possible condition before mailing.</p>
<p>Our packing specialist from Japan lit a candle and a hush fell over the<br />
crowd as he put your CD into the finest gold-lined box that money can<br />
buy.</p>
<p>We all had a wonderful celebration afterwards and the whole party<br />
marched down the street to the post office where the entire town of<br />
Portland waved &#8220;Bon Voyage!&#8221; to your package, on its way to you, in our<br />
private CD Baby jet on this day, Tuesday, June 17th.</p>
<p>I hope you had a wonderful time shopping at CD Baby.  We sure did.<br />
Your picture is on our wall as &#8220;Customer of the Year.&#8221;  We&#8217;re all<br />
exhausted but can&#8217;t wait for you to come back to <a href="http://cdbaby.com/" target="_blank"><span id="lw_1214402470_4" class="yshortcuts">CDBABY.COM</span></a>!!</p>
<p>Thank you, thank you, thank you!</p>
<p>Sigh&#8230;</p>
<p>&#8211;<br />
Derek Sivers, president, CD Baby<br />
the little store with the best new independent music &lt;a<br />
href=&#8221;<a href="http://cdbaby.com/" target="_blank"><span id="lw_1214402470_5" class="yshortcuts">http://cdbaby.com</span></a>&#8220;&gt;<a href="http://cdbaby.com/" target="_blank">http://cdbaby.com</a>&lt;/a&gt; <a href="http://us.mc307.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=cdbaby@cdbaby.com"><span id="lw_1214402470_6" class="yshortcuts">cdbaby@cdbaby.com</span></a><br />
<span id="lw_1214402470_7" class="yshortcuts" style="border-bottom: 1px dashed #0066cc; cursor: pointer;">(503)595-3000</span></p>
<img src="http://www.valleyprblog.com/?ak_action=api_record_view&id=1146&type=feed" alt="" /><div style="display:block"><small><em>posted in <a href="http://www.valleyprblog.com/category/marketing/">Marketing</a> by Dan Wool <a href="http://www.valleyprblog.com/marketing/cd-baby-and-the-power-of-voice/#comments">Leave A Comment</a><br />&copy;2012 <a href="http://www.valleyprblog.com">Valley PR Blog</a>. All Rights Reserved.</em></small></div>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/06/cdbaby.jpg'><img src="http://www.valleyprblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/06/cdbaby-300x200.jpg" alt="" title="cdbaby" width="300" height="200" class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-1151" /></a>When writing copy, who says you have to follow the rules? Sometimes you can create a brand personality all your own with strong writing and in the process, generate huge word-of-mouth.  </p>
<p>It all starts with nailing your brand&#8217;s voice. Below is an order confirmation from <a href="http://www.cdbaby.com">CD Baby</a>, an online independent music retailer. In a world where they compete with Apple/iTunes, Wal*Mart and Amazon &#8212; i.e. big box online retailers &#8212;  they are definitely at the far end of the &#8220;long tail.&#8221;</p>
<p>How do they stand out? They <em>know their audience</em> &#8212; thoughtful shoppers seeking out cool, new, independent music &#8212; and they delight them with a voice that&#8217;s not only fits the intellect but is delightfully unexpected.</p>
<p>&#8212;&#8211;Original Message&#8212;&#8211;<br />
From: CD Baby loves XXXX &lt;<a href="http://us.mc307.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=orders@cdbaby.com"><span id="lw_1214402470_1" class="yshortcuts">orders@cdbaby.com</span></a>&gt;<br />
To: <a href="http://us.mc307.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=alan4277@aol.com">emailaddress</a><br />
Sent: Tue, 17 Jun 2008 10:01:30 -0700 (PDT)<br />
Subject: XXXX &#8211; Your CD Baby Order!  (#4077506)</p>
<p>XXXX -</p>
<p>Thanks for your order with CD Baby!</p>
<p>#### ORDER # 40XXXX6 ######</p>
<p>WHERE YOU HEARD OF:<br />
band&#8217;s web site</p>
<p>Physical Items in this order:</p>
<p>=== Shipped Items ===<br />
** Shipped on 2008-06-17: **<br />
1 of XXXXXX: XXXXX ($9.99 each)<br />
***************</p>
<p>=========================</p>
<p>SHIPPING: $2.25<br />
GRAND TOTAL : $12.24 &#8211; US Dollars</p>
<p>SHIPPING ADDRESS:</p>
<p>XXXX<br />
XXXX<span id="lw_1214402470_2" class="yshortcuts" style="border-bottom: 1px dashed #0066cc; cursor: pointer;"><br />
Phoenix AZ 850XX<br />
UNITED STATES</span></p>
<p>BILLING ADDRESS:</p>
<p>XXXX<br />
<span id="lw_1214402470_3" class="yshortcuts" style="border-bottom: 1px dashed #0066cc; cursor: pointer;">XXXX<br />
Phoenix AZ 85020<br />
UNITED STATES</span></p>
<p>Your CD has been gently taken from our CD Baby shelves with sterilized<br />
contamination-free gloves and placed onto a satin pillow.</p>
<p>A team of 50 employees inspected your CD and polished it to make sure it<br />
was in the best possible condition before mailing.</p>
<p>Our packing specialist from Japan lit a candle and a hush fell over the<br />
crowd as he put your CD into the finest gold-lined box that money can<br />
buy.</p>
<p>We all had a wonderful celebration afterwards and the whole party<br />
marched down the street to the post office where the entire town of<br />
Portland waved &#8220;Bon Voyage!&#8221; to your package, on its way to you, in our<br />
private CD Baby jet on this day, Tuesday, June 17th.</p>
<p>I hope you had a wonderful time shopping at CD Baby.  We sure did.<br />
Your picture is on our wall as &#8220;Customer of the Year.&#8221;  We&#8217;re all<br />
exhausted but can&#8217;t wait for you to come back to <a href="http://cdbaby.com/" target="_blank"><span id="lw_1214402470_4" class="yshortcuts">CDBABY.COM</span></a>!!</p>
<p>Thank you, thank you, thank you!</p>
<p>Sigh&#8230;</p>
<p>&#8211;<br />
Derek Sivers, president, CD Baby<br />
the little store with the best new independent music &lt;a<br />
href=&#8221;<a href="http://cdbaby.com/" target="_blank"><span id="lw_1214402470_5" class="yshortcuts">http://cdbaby.com</span></a>&#8220;&gt;<a href="http://cdbaby.com/" target="_blank">http://cdbaby.com</a>&lt;/a&gt; <a href="http://us.mc307.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=cdbaby@cdbaby.com"><span id="lw_1214402470_6" class="yshortcuts">cdbaby@cdbaby.com</span></a><br />
<span id="lw_1214402470_7" class="yshortcuts" style="border-bottom: 1px dashed #0066cc; cursor: pointer;">(503)595-3000</span></p>
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